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Thursday, 27 July 2017

Space narative

Walt: structure a narrative piece of writing. 

it is the year 4017 I am leaving planet earth to find another planet because earth is dying. know one is looking after the earth so me and my dog coba will find another better earth for us people. He is a protective dog so he can protect me from aliens. He can bite their legs off and He can also talk. I have packed a lot of water and food and rocket booster shoes. While i was driving my spaceship me and my dog spotted an unknown planet. It looked very strange so i landed on the planet but before i could step out of my spaceship a strange thing was standing in the dust. It was a big big alien! I put my rocket booster shoes on and blasted away with my dog coba it destroyed my spaceship and my bag was in it Gonna have to try to live. The alien was following me and my dog so i put my rocket booster shoes on high max speed. I blasted away so fast i couldn't see where i was going soon i slowed down then i spotted a big and wide tree. I was waiting for nothing so i was going to make a tree house. It will be great. I built a treehouse with branches from the tree`s and leafs for the roof it wasn't much but i just went with it. That day i wanted to go back to my spaceship so i can fix it and defeat the alien then tell everyone on earth that me and my dog coba have found a nice place to live. I put my rocket booster shoes on grabbed my rocket blaster gun and blasted away with my dog again. We are here at my spaceship and the alien is not here but out of know where the alien jumped out the dust i shot him with my gun it just made him weak for a little while i shot him again he dropped to the ground. I shot him one more time then his legs went straight off his body then he crawled away with only his arms. We will go back to earth and tell every one that we have found a better earth then live a happy life.   THE END  

task description: For this task i had to write about two characters leaving earth to find another planet to live on be earth is dying and pollution has taken over the earth.

Thursday, 8 June 2017

My kayak

Walt: make connections with what we already know with what we read.




Step 2
Describe your design
I.e. “I have chosen a blue Slalom K1 kayak with a blue base and a red outline. I have chosen to place 5 yellow stars at the front of my kayak and a large triangle at the back.”
I chose slalom C1 because i like the look of it because  the colors i chose
Red black green blue and yelow.  I put a fist on my boat and some triangles and a sqruare.


Step 3
Describe who would buy your design
I.e. “I believe this kayak would be liked by teachers who want to get into kayaking. The paintjob is simple, but still pretty cool looking.”

I would buy it because i like the paint job and it wont break unti someone reckes it.

Friday, 31 March 2017

The red back

Walt: write narrative using descriptive language.

One day a spider was looking for food for its family well the spider was walking he saw a mantis the spider fan as fast as he can so the mantis couldn't get away the spider raped his legs around the mantis the mantis bites the spider the spider pokes the matis in the back then they here a loud stomp and they looked in the bushes and saw a big big big red back spider the redback pokes them both with his poisonous stinger. They both fall too the ground.
Then the Red back drags the spider and mantis then the red back has a fest on the spider and the mantis.





Thursday, 30 March 2017

my bug

My bug has two horns one stinger and if you pick it up it will sting and poke you and has sharp feet and super fast wings so you can't catch him. His favourite colors are red and black it can also suck your blood.